When Angels Come Out at Night by Sarah Bargfrede
Lord of the Flies strongly emphasizes the theme idea that all of mankind is inherently savage and that the fine line between good and evil is a permeable one. I decided to write a poem portraying a similar theme with the ideas of good vs. evil and how our roles in life and along that spectrum are never set in stone. So without further ado:
When an angel spreads its wings it makes a promise
To be faithful, to be truthful, to be kind
The halo upon its holy head
marks patience, virtue- heavenly wed
no wrongdoing ever to be uttered
The demon, horned, with pitchfork knows his role
To be hateful, to be evil, to be cruel
He sits atop his throne of glass
Sharp edges cut to painful pasts
A sinful smile curled upon his lips
The line’s been drawn we say its made of stone
An impenetrable fortress to divide us
Each soul with an important part
Together: a fine work of art
To maintain the war between the good and bad
When the sun rises an angel shares its gifts
Granting happiness to those who need it most
It soars with help of saintly wings
And brings us all the longed-for things
Its gifts of hope rain down from the sky
With setting sun comes demon’s nightly reign
bringing suffering to those who know it well
he stokes the flames of anger and fear
provoking melancholy tears
And surveys his work with cold, unfeeling stare
The line’s been drawn it’s built by our own hands
Hiding crevices with deceit and lies
Crumbling in hypocrisy
We maintain fragile democracy
But the wall is thin and human hands are flawed
And sometimes demons come out in the day
And smile at foreign joys they cannot give
They see wide smiles and bright eyes
Not understanding the strange disguise
But feeling something missing nonetheless
On those days angels shed their saintly garbs
To feed forbidden vices hidden close
In the darkest depths of night
They lose their pious, Godly light
And walk among the sinful grounds of man
The line’s been drawn but it is made of glass
as fragile, as delicate as silence
On haloed head stood demons horns
In devils smile, an angel soared
And in the glass, the cracks are ever-growing

Excellent - you should submit this to beginnings! Also, way to jump on the May blog post!
ReplyDeleteOkay Sarah, I see you. Your poem was AMAZING and I love the unique rhyme scheme you used here. The message is very strong and I can see how it reflected ideas present in Lord of the Flies. Really great job! This blew me away.
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